Saturday, May 3, 2008

discovery

while relaxing on a petite porch
enveloped by may's hinting sunshine
i see the green grass on my mother's yard
i escape the porch
i place my naked feet in the grass

while standing in the blades of grass
touched by the light-breathing early afternoon
i see a smooth lane of sidewalk
i slip from the yard
i run down the sidewalk

while running down the sidewalk
indulged by saturday's leisure
i feel a breakout of small rain
i play in the rain
like children should
while i am 28 years old.

11 comments:

dejanae said...

i love the rain
who says only kids should play in it.lol

memphiz said...

There aint no wrong with playing in the rain at 28 lol. I wish more people would do it.

Brown Girl Gumbo said...

I love reading your poems. They're like a breath of fresh air.

As for playing in the rain - it sounds so freeing!

Yasmeen Christian said...

@ dejanae
@ memphiz
@ brown girl gumbo
So glad you came by. Love.

Tha BossMack TopSoil said...

Tha bare feet part is my favorite ;-)

Brittany said...

I like the rain...just as long as I don't get my hair wet.

Torrance Stephens bka All-Mi-T said...

nice

Don said...

co-sign.

Jon Content said...

You can never go wrong with poetry...never.

1/3 of what I used to be said...

barefeet and rain sounds like enjoying the little things on life. cool poem:-)

niki.mac said...

this is so beautiful! made my day :)