Sunday, May 25, 2008

before i go to sleep

place the smooth palm
of my hand
on your right cheek
while i close the cave
that is your mouth
with the last kiss
that pleases me

11 comments:

James Tubman said...

only a woman could come up with something so sweet and unnocent

Muze said...

very nice.

poetry is so lovely.

Stephen Bess said...

I thought that I could write a short sweet poem, but you're good. Very nice.

Brown Girl Gumbo said...

I just love your poetry!!

Don said...

soft and sexy. i loved it.

Luxury said...

aww. that was so tranquil. =]

dejanae said...

beautiful

Yasmeen Christian said...

I am so... encouraged. Thank you.

Torrance Stephens bka All-Mi-T said...

now thats love
terse and real

Eb the Celeb said...

niiiiicce!

1/3 of what I used to be said...

i like your poetry. short and sweet. This one is very sensual tho. i like this alot:-)