Tuesday, October 21, 2008

my flowers are sad

the grass is brown-green
the air is stinging cold
the sun's smile is narrowed
my flowers are sad

fall has fallen
hard on my shoulders
on these days
i am too lazy
i won't pick up flowers
at

7 comments:

  1. Stephen A. BessOctober 21, 2008 at 3:59 PM

    Nice as always. Beautiful. By the way, I have an award for you on my blog.

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  2. ChrisOctober 21, 2008 at 6:17 PM

    fall is definitely here. Lovely piece.

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  3. 1/3October 22, 2008 at 5:31 PM

    yea im sad fall is here too. pretty peom yas:-)

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  4. All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] RawdawgbuffaloOctober 24, 2008 at 9:38 AM

    always have time and feel like picking up the flowers and congrats on award

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  5. TarynOctober 24, 2008 at 11:02 AM

    i like the fall so I dont mind if my flowers are sad. Fall is a beautiful season.

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  6. Alice S. October 26, 2008 at 11:43 AM

    Beautiful... I too am sad, I'm more of a spring type of girl

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  7. Charles (Illumistrations)October 26, 2008 at 11:52 AM

    I love your poetry. I feel for your flowers...I'm kinda sad too...but at least I can wear a wider variety of fashionable clothes in the fall.

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