I am looking for the luxurious meadow
Among the upright and stubborn trees
So I can walk in its grass
Of fine crushed emeralds and find
A lazy rolling lake beside
I liked the free verse of the wind there most
Until I met the happy dancing flowers
Tickling my nose with
Jasmine.
I am looking for the luxurious essence of the meadow.
I have lost the scent of
Jasmine.
Saturday, April 5, 2008
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visually stimulating metaphors. i read it twice, because the first time i was distracted, but i was really able to visualize the emerald meadow and the rolling lake, etc. can we get an excerpt from one of your stories? and i watched part of the commercial for roscoe's chicken and waffles. lmao at you saying ordering other things confuses the staff
I will be posting pieces of my short stories.
Good concept. Like the opposite degree of emotions shown.
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