Saturday, May 3, 2008

discovery

while relaxing on a petite porch
enveloped by may's hinting sunshine
i see the green grass on my mother's yard
i escape the porch
i place my naked feet in the grass

while standing in the blades of grass
touched by the light-breathing early afternoon
i see a smooth lane of sidewalk
i slip from the yard
i run down the sidewalk

while running down the sidewalk
indulged by saturday's leisure
i feel a breakout of small rain
i play in the rain
like children should
while i am 28 years old.

11 comments:

  1. i love the rain
    who says only kids should play in it.lol

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  2. There aint no wrong with playing in the rain at 28 lol. I wish more people would do it.

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  3. I love reading your poems. They're like a breath of fresh air.

    As for playing in the rain - it sounds so freeing!

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  4. @ dejanae
    @ memphiz
    @ brown girl gumbo
    So glad you came by. Love.

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  5. I like the rain...just as long as I don't get my hair wet.

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  6. You can never go wrong with poetry...never.

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  7. barefeet and rain sounds like enjoying the little things on life. cool poem:-)

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  8. this is so beautiful! made my day :)

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